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Perspective

Aug. 16, 2016

Excellent legal analysis. Now make it 40 percent shorter

Removing excess words and using plain, simple language should be an essential step in all lawyer's editing process. By Jeff Fisher

Jeffrey M. Fisher

Partner
Farella, Braun & Martel LLP

Intellectual Property Litigation

235 Montgomery St Fl 20
San Francisco , CA 94104

Phone: (415) 954-4912

Fax: (415) 954-4480

Email: jfisher@fbm.com

Univ of Illinois COL; Champaign IL

Jeff Fisher is in the firm's Intellectual Property Litigation Department in San Francisco

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By Jeff Fisher

Brevity and simplicity are essential to good legal writing. They make writing clear and forceful. They keep readers' attention, a task that is harder in this age of smart phones and 24-hour news cycles. Straightforward writing exudes confidence and intelligence. Writers with a direct style appear more thoughtful and insightful than those who rely on jargon or excessive modifiers.

When I started law school, I paid no attention ...

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