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Law Practice

Feb. 21, 2018

21 tips for lawyers to make better 2nd drafts

My freshman year political science professor often quoted Ernest Hemingway's maxim that "the first draft of anything is sh**."

Matt Sonne

Partner
Sheppard, Mullin, Richter & Hampton LLP

Matt previously worked in the White House as a writer for President Clinton.

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Scott Sonne

Arizona State University School of Law

Scott spent his law career with Luce Forward Hamilton & Scripps LLP. He teaches insurance law at Arizona State University School of Law.

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21 tips for lawyers to make better 2nd drafts
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My freshman year political science professor often quoted Ernest Hemingway's maxim that "the first draft of anything is sh**." While I never forgot it, learning how the second and third drafts could improve on the first took much longer. The following are a few techniques you might employ:

1. Eliminate needless words. This is at the heart of good writing. Make a habit of going throug...

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